100 Word Challenge - 24 October

By Anonymous -
The promt was ....as the door slammed, I knew....

As the door slammed, I knew something was off. Me and Wade have a lot of arguments, but he never seemed to get this vexed about it. My best friend, Wade Fergus, was known for keeping a cool head in stressful situations. I walk over to the glass panel in the door frame, and peer through the smudged glass. What better to see, peering back at me, Wade. I stood back to open the door, and I turned the doorknob, to no avail. I tried again, but still to no avail. Wade frantically said ‘Shanan!’ We both anxiously started pushing the door handle. ‘Wade, Help Me!’ I scream in trepidation. . .









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  1. Ghaya, Edinburgh, UK, 100WC3 November 2017 at 10:56

    Hi Shanan,

    I really enjoy how go straight into the story and I love how its slightly vague so it gives a sense of suspense to the story. You've also used some great vocabulary in this piece. It's a great piece.

    Ghaya 100WC

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